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As a writer, my first area of interest is obviously my books, but for my blog I will try to address different writing issues or provide my own tips when it comes to writing or self-publishing.

My blog also includes shout-outs to and recommendations for other blogs or websites, book reviews or recommendation, and a few posts sparked by nothing but an area of interest at the moment or occasionally a complaint or five. 

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TBT--Works in Progress past and present

6/26/2014

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It's Throwback Thursday once again, as evidenced by all of the profile picture updates on Facebook, and I thought that I would do a version of TBT here on my blog by looking at my past and present works, most of which are still in, or permanently at, the WIP status.
  1. Children of the Stars- Written in middle school, it had a passable plot but was severely limited by the fact that my writing abilities were that of a middle schooler. Craft is something that is learned over time, and there is only so much "time" you can put in before the age of 12. I finished this one, although it is lost approximately four computers ago.
  2. Children of the Starts 2- This was basically the fanfic sequel of the original story, following the children of the original stories main characters. It was never finished, and had no real plot or conflict.
  3. Callum (No real title)-Written my freshman year of college, this was a big mess of awful. No real plot, with secondary characters who wanted to take over, it was basically a rip-off of the Wheel of Time series. I like to pretend that this one never happened.
  4. The Dark Time pre-The Talented- This is a conglomeration of several different works, most of which didn't get past the 5 page mark. It was a time of discovery, and eventually lead up to The Talented.
  5. The Talented-My first real finished work, this is the project that I funded with Kickstarter and will be publishing later this year. It goes off to editors in just over three weeks, and I am giving it the final once-over now. It's a thing of beauty (imo) which a solid plot, great characters, and writing skills much improved since the days of Children of the Stars.
  6. The Talented 2 (real name forthcoming)- Still solidly in the WIP category, I plan on this being another great book and following The Talented into the published market in the fall of 2015.
  7. The Bodyguard- A strange mix of finished and WIP, I am releasing this as a serialized novel with a new part going out every Monday. You can read the first two parts on my site under Book List or over on Wattpad. It has a great FMC, an intriguing plot, and goes through a careful crit process and edit before each addition is released. It was born out of the 2012 NaNoWriMo.
  8. "Kingdom of the Light"- My one and only short story. I really do like it, but it sort of confirms for me that I am not cut out for short stories. Anything more in depth than "Kingdom" would make me want to follow the characters more, which goes against the entire idea of the short story.
  9. Children of the Sky- A WIP that is an attempt at something more in the paranormal, space-alien, fantasy in the real world game. It is still highly debatable whether I will be able to make this work or if this is just a long writing exercise and diversion from all of the editing I am otherwise doing this summer.

Looking at this, I am a little impressed with myself for how much writing I have done in a relatively short time and the fact that, on reflection, I do have more variety in my stories than I feared. Looking at this, I know that Callum is a dead loss, but if I wanted to try my hand at High Fantasy I might revisit some of the elements of Children of the Stars. It would need some significant changes, but there are real problems to explore there.

At the same time, maybe it is better to enjoy my TBT but continue moving forward. After all, isn't that what the Facebook pictures symbolize?

So what are your TBT works? Anything that brings back great memories or reminds you of great ideas/characters? Anything that you wish you could erase from your writing past the way you want to erase that one horrible and embarrassing boyfriend or girlfriend?

I would love to hear more of the author's version of TBT.

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The love/hate relationship with deadlines

6/2/2014

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Let's be honest: we all have a love/hate relationship with deadlines.

On one hand, deadlines are big, awful, scary things. Like running late for an interview, deadlines can cause untold amounts of stress and anxiety. I have to get this done! I'm falling behind! I'm not going to make it!

Deadlines are the reason college students pull all-nighters and 8 hour days turn into 12 hour days. They cause stress.


They also "cause" focus. 

When you have a deadline, you don't forget about that project. You don't sit down and watch three hours of Antiques Roadshow. You don't go on a leisurely Sunday drive. You work.

And that can be exciting. My latest (and greatest) version of my book The Talented was finished on the deadline for this year's ABNA. My work on The Bodyguard is on a deadline so that I can start releasing it as a serialized novel June 16th.

My recent surge of job applications forced me to focus on my goals and philosophies as a teacher.

Deadlines are big, awful, scary things that result in focus and hard work. 

I don't know that there is any single thing more important than that. Not if you want to be a serious writer. Or really, a serious anything.

Deadlines provide an impetus for action. That impetus is especially important when the action is for something secondary in your life. If you write for a living, you are going to keep working on that next novel because that's your job. When you write for a hobby or a sideline, there needs to be something more. Something that makes you work.

And that is what deadlines do.

So find a way to give yourself a deadline. Find a writing buddy or critique partner who expects 5,000 new words a week, and if you don't deliver you owe them $5 (or a beer). Enter a contest. Set yourself a goal that, if reached, will result in some sort of reward. If I finish this draft by July 1st, I get to buy a new pair of shoes.

Trust me, a deadline can make all the difference.

And since I only have hours left on my Kickstarter campaign, that is giving me a strict deadline on asking for last minute donations. As I write this I am sitting at 91%. I invite everyone to throw me a couple bucks or share the following on Twitter or Facebook: Only hours left to raise funds for The Talented by J.R. McGinnity via Kickstarter. http://buff.ly/1jMpIOT


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Self-publishing and editors

5/19/2014

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I've raised 51% of my Kickstarter goals as of today, which is both perfect (since I am halfway through my campaign) and terrifying (since I am halfway through my campaign). But I've become confident enough to search for editors and request sample edits, and after today I think that I have found one (assuming that I get my Kickstarter goal met).

In an earlier blog post, "Why I'm scared of self-publishing," I talk about the fact that one of the worries I have about publishing my author is that it will somehow be less than traditionally published books. Less well-written. Less fluid. Less polished.

Less.

And that is one of the major reasons I am going to invest in an editor. I don't want my book to be less than just because there isn't a publishing company backing this endeavor. There are tremendously talented traditionally published authors out there. The kind of authors whom are adored by fans and emulated by other writers. The Tolkiens and Kings and Robertses of the world. The people that we want to be when we grow up.

I'm not ready to rank myself with them (even privately), but I do think that I have the chops to stand with some of the mid-level traditionally published authors. And I know that I will get better with experience (like fine cheese). So if I really, truly am the equal to some of mid-level authors, there is no reason that my final product should not be just as good as theirs.

As long as I have an editor (and a cover artist).

My hope is that, with the help of my editors, my book could be placed alongside of some traditionally published author's with the reader completely unable to tell which of us had a publishing house backing it (aside from the places on the trad. pubbed book that say which house it came from...).

P.s. I have been comparing myself to mid-level authors out of a sense of decency and modesty. Maybe next year I'll compare myself to the A-list authors.
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The importance of momentum

5/12/2014

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mo·men·tum  [moh-men-tuhm] noun
1. force or speed of movement; impetus, as 
of a physical object or course of events:

When we think of writing, we think of characters, plot, climax, and cliff-hangers. We think of world building. We think of editing and beta readers. We might even think of age group, genre, and publishing.

Momentum is a word most often used in physics.

Newton's first law of motion is that "An object at rest stays at rest and an object in motion stays in motion with the same speed and in the same direction unless acted upon by an unbalanced force." Most people stop after the second "stays in motion" part, and for this post I am going to do the same.

An object in motion stays in motion.

It's a natural law. It's natural for something in motion to stay in motion--and since "natural" is a current buzzword, this must mean it's good!

I typically avoid all things physics. Physics has an unfortunate friendship with math, and I don't like hanging out with bad crowds. But this is one thing that I can get behind. 

Because building up momentum is a good thing.

Think back to the last time you were writing and you reached that perfect place where inspiration and creativity meet work and you can hardly get the words out fast enough. And it stays like that for a long time.

You built momentum.

It's like when you are on a run and you hit that sweet spot where it feels like you can run for hours. You're not fighting the exercise, and that helps you build momentum.

My Kickstarter campaign is now 37% funded after only a week. It has momentum.

The more you write, the more you write; the more you run, the more you run. (And apparently, the more people donate, the more other people donate.)







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Building a fantasy world

5/9/2014

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There are thousands of blog posts that discuss how to build a fantasy world. Some people spend months doing extensive research and planning, weeks drawing up maps, and hours upon hours writing out the history of the world.

And those are good things.

I'm not saying that every fantasy writer needs to spend as much time world building as they do story telling, but I am saying that it is essential to, at some point, put a real mind to world building--especially when it comes to the natural part of your world.

I live in Minnesota. We have deciduous trees (oaks, maples, birches) that drop their leaves in the winter, and we have a few coniferous trees like pines that stay green. It rains anytime it wants to March-October, and snows anytime it wants to September-May (and yes, I did just overlap those by several months--Minnesotans know). And if I was writing a typical fantasy novel, which are usually set in similar climates (England, the East Coast of the U.S.) I could go with this knowledge. Hot days with a chance of rain, freezing cold with a chance of snow. Heatstroke in the summer, hypothermia in the winter. Water, water, everywhere--lakes, streams, ponds, and precipitation.

I wouldn't need to do any research to build that world. I live it.

But my fantasy novel is more reminiscent of Africa than Minnesota, and that took research.

Did you know that there are two rainy seasons in the Serengeti? A short one and a long one?

I didn't.

It also doesn't rain all day there, and the Serengeti doesn't get as hot as I thought it did, even if the dry season. But that's why research is important. Watching Wild Discovery every Wednesday when growing up just didn't prepare me to create a realistic world for Adrienne and her compatriots. 

"But wait!" you say. "This is my world. It can rain if I want [it] to!"

And you're absolutely right...to a point.





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A little levity

5/8/2014

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Sometimes, life gets too serious. I'm running a Kickstarter campaign right now, and it's going even better than hoped, but it's still stressful wondering whether or not I will meet my goal by June 4th.

So I decided to interject a little bit of levity and just direct you guys to the blog SlushPileHell for your amusement.

If you've visited that blog, you know that it is amazing. If you haven't, you should. SlushPileHell is a blog by a literary agent who posts funny snippets from query letter fails.

And I'm not talking about query letters that didn't make it--I am well aware of the fact that most queries are met with rejection--these are real fails. Fails of epic proportion. Fails where the agent is told that the book was inspired by God, or will sell 50 billion copies, or fits every single genre.

Or where the writer demonstrated a remarkable inability to use spell check, correct grammar, or any ability to write coherently. 


So even if you have suffered rejection from agents yourself, you can read this and comfort yourself with the fact that there is someone out there failing even bigger than you.
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Kickstarter pick of the day--Do I Sound Gay? 

5/7/2014

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I genuinely like Kickstarter. I didn't just put my project (which has now reached 10%) on there to raise money, I did it because I believe that crowd funding is a great thing.

Think about how much progress in arts and inventions could happen if everyone donated $5 a month. It would be revolutionary.

But when I saw Do I Sound Gay? A Documentary About Finding Your True Voice on Kickstarter today, I realized that it could be an amazing tool for social change as well.

I want my book published. I really do. And obviously I would like everyone who reads my Kickstarter blogs to donate to my campaign, but if you're not going to donate to mine, think about donating to this one. Or, you know, donate to both, because that would be awesome.

As a teacher, I know how hard it is for students, especially LGBT students, to accept who they are and become comfortable with themselves. And I think that a documentary focused on finding your "true voice" is amazing and could make the difference in so many peoples' lives.


And the reasons David Thorpe gives for making this documentary are great. He has a whole list that you should check out on his campaign page, but I'm going to put the two reasons that I find most compelling here:


    Reason No. 2: “Sounding gay” is still a trigger for mockery, bullying and violence. LGBT kids are far more likely to commit suicide or drop out of school because they feel unsafe. Zach King, one of our brave young subjects, was viciously assaulted at school.

    Reason No. 4: A lot of people think it’s okay to be gay as long as you don’t act - or sound - that way. The daily pressure to cover, hide or “pass” affects many minorities. Let’s relieve the pressure.


When I saw this documentary listed on Kickstarter, I was intrigued. And when I clicked on it and read more, I was pulled in. So I'm going to encourage everyone to go to the campaign page for David Thorpe's documentary Do I Sound Gay? A Documentary About Finding Your True Voice and see if it is a project that you, too, would like to be a part of.


And now a quick reminder that my campaign to get my fantasy novel The Talented professional edited and have cover art designed before publishing will be running for another 27 days (until June 4th) so check it out.








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Kickstarter pick of the day: Snakable 

5/6/2014

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It's day 2 of my Kickstarter campaign, and I'm happy to say that I have raised nearly 10% of my goal so far. Keep contributing, friends and readers!

But in the giving spirit of Kickstarter, I wanted to showcase a project that I found on there today: Snakable The Lightning & Micro USB Cable with Armor. 

If you're like me, you're not immediately sure what a "lightning & micro USB cable" is, but the "armor" part sure caught your eye.



As someone who spends a lot of time on the computer (perils of being a writer) and also has close bonds with her kindle and iPhone, I know the pain of the moment when you go to plug in your device and the charger doesn't work.


And apparently the reason for this is broken wires inside of the cable. Except when my cats chew through the cord. Then the reason is teeth.


I don't know what to do about cats chewing through my cords, but the developers of Snakable have come up with a way to protect the wires that are better than existing ways. With this technology, wrapping the cords around themselves to save space or bending the cord to reach that awkward outlet won't stress the wires to the breaking point.


For all of the specifics and to see the full plan for Snakable, check out that campaign page and, if you're an Apple user, this product is apparently going to be Apple certified, which will make the majority of my devices happy :)




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My Kickstarter campaign is live

5/5/2014

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The day has come! I am now ready to accept donations to my Kickstarter campaign.

But this isn't a blog post asking for money (although if you'd like to donate money to my campaign, I wouldn't say now). This is a blog post chronicling the Kickstarter journey.

Today, of course, I'm going to feature my own campaign, but each day I want to look through and see what some other people are doing. I think that Kickstarter is an amazing crowd-funding tool that helps a lot of people fulfill their dreams, and do it well (see my last post for dreams poorly executed), and I want the people who visit my site to have a chance at seeing not just what I did, but what other people are doing.

But today is about me. My goal is to raise $2,500 to publish my fantasy novel The Talented. I want to do it right, and that means money to go with the time I've already put in. My plans are listed on my campaign site, but here is a breakdown:

The things I am focusing on:
  • I need a content edit
  • I need a professional cover design
  • I need a final copy edit

The things I want:
  • I want help with the formatting (unless I turn out to be a formatting savant)
  • I want to be able to have copies printed as rewards and to sell on consignment
  • I want some promotional material (bookmarks, posters, etc.)
  • I want some money for ads and reviews

The things I dream of:
  • Having an audiobook recorded


So if you want to help my dreams (or wants or focuses(?) ) come true, you can head over to my campaign and donate. Otherwise, stay tuned to see tomorrow's Kickstarter Highlight (according to me, not the Kickstarter top picks).

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Why I'm scared of self-publishing

5/2/2014

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Warning: I'm not just talking about poor sales.

I'm going to self-publish in a few months. As a matter of fact, I'm about to launch my Kickstarter campaign to raise money for it. And I'm very excited. Very. But I'm also nervous.

But I'm not just nervous about people reading and judging my book. My worries aren't just "what if they hate it?" or "what if I only sell three copies and those three all go to my family?" Those are normal worries, and although that would hurt, it's not as scary as my real worry.

Which is that my self-published novel will end up as just more flotsam in the slush of self-pubbed books (and flotsam is optimistic: implying that I'm floating on the top of the slush).

You see, far too many books published by indie authors are subpar.

Now don't get me wrong, I think that the self-publishing industry is great. In theory. Making more books available to readers is awesome--it will allow people to fill niches that traditional publishers don't even know are there (or are too small for the trad. publishers to care about). All of these new books are great for readers, and fulfill a lot of indie authors' dreams.

But therein lies the problem. Too many people are publishing their "dreams" without polishing those dreams up. Traditional publishers might spend a year or more getting a book ready to distribute. There are multiple edits, covers to design, titles to change, more edits, more covers, another title change. Rinse and repeat until that book is as close to perfect (or marketable) as it is going to get.

Occasionally you will find a typo or inconsistency in a traditionally published book, but not that often and not that glaring, because there were professional editors involved.

That is one of the major differences between traditionally published books and self-published books, which are mostly edited by the author, a couple of beta readers (maybe), and possibly that English major the author kind of knows. And these self-edited self-pubbed books create a lot of slush. People prematurely publish on Amazon and Smashwords and create messes that can cover up the good self-published books.



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